Confrontation: A Poem

posted July 5th, 2017, 7:10 pm


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July 5th, 2017, 7:13 pm

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I wrote my first poem for Lynxstar's Tyranny! Yay!
I tried to do something different with this one. Instead of a vent for one of the characters, I did
An argument between two of them. Meep.



Confrontation
A poem by WildfireK
To the tune of "Meet me Inside" from Hamilton

Singers' names are hidden because of spoilers

(0:02)
Cat A: (Cat B’s name).
Cat B: Is that (Cat A’s name) I descry?
Cat A: Would you like to know where you’ll go when you die?
Cat B: Surely, it’s too early to tell, but of course,
I know already; it’s the Dark Forest.
Cat A: You know everything there is to know, don’t you?
Be a little bit – a little bit – more modest, won’t you?
Pretentious, resentful –
Cat B: Now wait a second, there –
Cat A: Not the least bit respectful –
Cat B: Now that’s hardly fair –
Cat A: I need you to listen –
Cat B: Now what is so distressingly important?
Cat A: This is:
(0:26)
You cannot keep prancing about like you’re on vacation
And no, you can no longer practice your equivocation –
Cat B: If that is so, then you would see my devotion;
I’m free of the quarantine that you’ve set in motion –
Cat A: You’ve killed in more ways than one with those jaws –
How many cats have their blood on your paws?
Cat B: You’re blaming me for that fight?
Cat A: Everyone else is in the right -
I’m utterly appalled at your lack of foresight;
Cat B: How many days have you seen?
Cat A: Many; and all fade to night –
Independence is not worth not seeing the light –
Cat B: How stupidly controlling do you have to be?
All this nonsense about time and destiny –
Everybody but me follows you blindly
Is that the reason faulted is where you find me?
Cat A: You’re a puppet!
Cat B: I’ve had enough, it –
Cat A: You’re nothing –
Cat B: You’re bluffing.
Cat A: Well, tough! I’m sorry you’re not taking the chance
To learn something!
Cat B: What, that you’re better than me?
Cat A: No, that we are enemies.
Cat B: How could you be so cold?
Cat A: How could you say no?
That’s it, I’ve said all there is to be said.
Remember all the times you’ve failed us when you’re dead.

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July 5th, 2017, 8:04 pm

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THIS IS AMAZING


WIFI
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HOW

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July 5th, 2017, 8:14 pm

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@HollyTheFluffyCat:
I dunno it just came to me

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July 5th, 2017, 8:16 pm

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@WildfireK: BUT


THIS IS AMAZING

YOU ARE AN AMAZING FREAAKING WRITER


LIKE

I COULDN'T WRITE BETTER IF MY LIFE DEPENDED ON IT

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July 5th, 2017, 8:28 pm

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@HollyTheFluffyCat:

Thaankss soooo muuuchhhh! *Hugs
0~0

By the way, are you able to keep up with the song? Is reading the lyrics to the beat of the song working for you, or do you get lost?

And how is the story going for you? Do you like the characters?

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July 6th, 2017, 5:51 am

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@WildfireK: THE STORY IS AMAZZZZZZZING


THE SONG I CAN KEEP UP WITH

YOU AREE AMAZZIIIIIING ^V^

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July 6th, 2017, 10:40 am

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@HollyTheFluffyCat:
Really? Thanks so much!!! :3

Phew, thank goodness; I was always worried about that. It doesn't sound as great when the beat if off xp

Okay dokie! Time to pester you endlessly with questions like I'mg doing with Wiisp lol xp

Who is your favorite character? What five characters do you pity most?
Do you trust Rubystar?

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July 8th, 2017, 7:09 am

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Love it :D
It's between Lynxheart and- At first I thought Rubystar, but now I'm leaning more towards Froststar, actually.

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July 8th, 2017, 10:26 am

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@WiispNightmare:
I knew you'd get it because of my hints
But shhhhh hehe

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July 8th, 2017, 11:30 am

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@WildfireK: YAY I AM SMERT

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July 8th, 2017, 11:35 am

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@WiispNightmare:
It kind of narrows it down with "equivocation" lol

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October 15th, 2017, 4:03 pm

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wow dats a lot of werds. FABULOUS. anyway how do you get the art in the extra pages? like on your characters page? or your Fanart, Art trades, and Requests page?

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October 15th, 2017, 5:19 pm

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@-FluorescentScales-:

You need to do a little bit of coding -

<img src="url of image here-you need to post it on an image hosting site">

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October 15th, 2017, 8:33 pm

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@WildfireK: oooh okay thank you!

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